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  • Empathy

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    Only two chapters?

    God dang it. Now what am I gunna read??

    ...sigh.

    The last chapter was touching. Poor Gerard...poor Mikey...

    *Has always sucked with comments*
    September 13th, 2007 at 01:58pm
  • Unicorn Parade

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    :hug:
    There'll be more. :)
    But as you all who read this might know by now, this story is ending soon. Very soon. :(

    If any of you readers/suscribers want a sequel, there'll be an info and general approval chapter set up after the ending. :D
    Those who want a sequel, tell me once it has been set up. :D

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    August 15th, 2007 at 05:28pm
  • wxyz.

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    Ack.
    This literally brought tears to my eyes.
    Wow, I'm sitting in my room in my pyjamas and I'm actually crying.
    Ugh, damn estrogen.
    Anyhowwws, brilliant as always. Keep on writing this, it's one of my favorites.
    August 15th, 2007 at 05:18pm
  • Paralyzed.

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    Wow.
    It's absolutely marvelous.
    I love= it=]]
    Very good.
    August 9th, 2007 at 03:32pm
  • Cho Kyuhyun

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    Woot, update :]
    Wow, you really take your readers on an emotional rollercoaster...
    il est magnifique mon ami. 8)

    Loved it. Seriously.
    xxxxx
    August 8th, 2007 at 08:01pm
  • Hoxton Heroine

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    *sobs*
    why? Frankie? Mikey?
    NOooooooooo
    awesome though.
    August 8th, 2007 at 07:55pm
  • Empathy

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    This story is really emotional.

    I can't really put down how much I enjoy reading it in words.
    August 8th, 2007 at 07:51pm
  • mini_spork

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    is this the end???

    you made me cry... and it's really a dificult making me cry :(
    August 8th, 2007 at 07:39pm
  • Cho Kyuhyun

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    As you know, I really dislike MCR fics... No idea why, I just do, but like Elmo's World, I really like this. :] It was touching, moving, emotional etc. And most importantly, wonderfull. You are such a good writer.
    I loved it.
    xoxoxo.
    August 7th, 2007 at 07:33pm
  • Bert McCracken.

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    Story/Review game.

    I read the first chapter of Think of the angels.

    I liked the beginning of this. It wasn't like most fan fictions I've read. You didn't gave away much of the plot, giving the reader suspense and wanting more. There weren't any grammar nor spelling mistakes. I also liked your use of simple and complex sentences.

    Frank was on his feet in an instant, panting heavily, eyes crazed and gleaming with the fire of madness.
    I think this was my favourite line. I think it was the metaphors in it that stood out to me most.

    The only thing I did notice was the fact used many repetitive words. At first, they did give effect, but after awhile they just became mundane. Only couple though. Some were great.
    August 7th, 2007 at 07:08pm
  • Empathy

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    *Sobs*

    Not Mikey T_T.

    I like him.

    And Frank...oh the horror T_T.

    moremoremoremoremoremore. I swear I'll start checking my emails...XD
    August 6th, 2007 at 07:47pm
  • Unicorn Parade

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    Ohmygod..thank you so much, everyone. T_T
    I love all of you. :hug:

    Note: don't worry peoples...the whole saga isn't over until I say it is.

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    August 6th, 2007 at 04:52pm
  • Hermione Granger.

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    Cry

    MIKEY :(
    August 6th, 2007 at 02:20am
  • wxyz.

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    Woohoo, long update!
    That was seriously sad.
    Yet I love it. The 'Mama' and 'Ghost Of You' lyrics were absolutely perfect.
    August 6th, 2007 at 01:43am
  • Hoxton Heroine

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    oh my god
    i'm crying.
    like, really crying.
    :'(
    sooooo sad.
    you're the first writer on here to make me cry with a story and i've read a LOT of stories.
    you're an amazing writer.
    =]
    i didn't want him to die.
    =(
    August 5th, 2007 at 11:35pm
  • SomethingEdge

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    wow
    just wow
    more soon please
    August 5th, 2007 at 02:14pm
  • Unicorn Parade

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    I kinda lost the file(it's a bluw file in RL) where everything was for awhile...I'm so sorry. T_T
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    August 3rd, 2007 at 09:19pm
  • wxyz.

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    Wow, that update was so intense, a raw stream of thought and emotion.
    Amazing.
    Oh my god, though. Frankie's.... dead?
    Daaaamn.
    My only criticism: You take way too long to upate! :]
    August 3rd, 2007 at 05:37am
  • Jesus_Of_Port_Toilet

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    WOW O_O
    This is amazing! It's beautifully written, and is truly amazing!
    I love it so much!
    August 3rd, 2007 at 12:23am
  • Spyder Venom

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    thisis so sad! its so fucking amazing but so sad im nearly in tears!_______________________________________________________♥ *
    August 3rd, 2007 at 12:03am