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  • alimo1

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    This is a very cool idea for a story. I look forward to reading some more of your work.
    September 19th, 2010 at 03:41pm
  • KidChaos

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    I love this series and I can't wait for more.
    Also I'd love to see a character whoes power revolves around dreams
    April 8th, 2010 at 12:00am
  • kiss.me

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    I really like this :D It' different from all the other powers stories, in a very good way ^^ Keep up!
    August 5th, 2009 at 06:31pm
  • The Violet Writer

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    Wow - I love this. I've never read anything like it. It's amazing, and I would pay good money for this book if I saw it in Barnes & Noble.
    PLEASE keep writing!
    June 28th, 2009 at 03:25am
  • ofnothingness

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    I really love these stories; they both demonstrate good writership and excellent ideas. Great job!!
    June 22nd, 2009 at 09:30pm
  • demetria-lynn

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    ...pour moi?? :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D
    Absolutely LOVED this one... like, I died a little when I read it.
    And I mean that in a good way.

    Bravery as a power--excellent idea, and it's really true. I loved that. As I was reading it, I was thinking about all the superpower stuff that could happen to him, and I was expecting that kind of thing, but then at the end, it made perfect sense the way you had it. It was unexpected and inspirational and très superbe!

    Also, if there's anything in history I absolutely love, it's the two world wars, so I love anything set in those time periods!

    Again... POUR MOI??? Merci merci merci! That means a lot to me! You deserve a billion amazing comments. A GABAZZILION. :-D
    June 14th, 2009 at 12:56am
  • xXGreyWingsXx

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    Riveting!
    100% caught my attention from the first second.
    And bravery is definitely a power.

    I can't remember what my idea was... =S
    Oh well, it shall be a nice surprise.

    Actually, I know more about WWI than WWII because of all the Wilfrid Owen poetry we've been doing at school.
    June 13th, 2009 at 02:13pm
  • xXGreyWingsXx

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    Heehee, I'll pay. :cute:
    Aw, but so sad!!!
    Better and better and better and better...
    May 23rd, 2009 at 11:25pm
  • demetria-lynn

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    :-( :-( :-( So sad, so sad. I can't imagine the pain he goes through. But really, that chapter was my absolute favorite. Absolutely amazing.
    May 12th, 2009 at 08:14pm
  • PACE_girl

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    I definitely won't mind. This story is great. I love how you change the writing for each person to fit their personalities. My favorite chapter was the third one. That guy's funny.

    This kinda reminds me of Heroes...
    April 27th, 2009 at 06:18am
  • saxophonesandmcr

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    loved the latest installment. I like the idea of 9/11 go for it
    April 18th, 2009 at 01:34pm
  • demetria-lynn

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    Amazing chapter! :-)
    I wouldn't be opposed to 9-11 being used. I think that could make for a really interesting backdrop for this story.
    April 15th, 2009 at 02:17am
  • xXGreyWingsXx

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    HOLY MOLIE GIRL!
    These are just getting better and better.
    Aaron's definitely my favourite so far.
    And go ahead and use 9-11, it sounds like an awesome idea.
    Hail
    April 14th, 2009 at 01:55pm
  • demetria-lynn

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    These are so amazing! I LOVE stuff like this!
    Absolutely can't wait for more.
    :-] :-] :-]
    April 11th, 2009 at 01:17am
  • Morally Corrupted

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    ahhaahah I love the Claude character. 76 and going rock climbing :P nice. this story is awesome! can't wait for more.
    April 7th, 2009 at 04:25am
  • xXGreyWingsXx

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    I say it yet again.
    WOW.
    Claude is awesome.
    Love him to pieces.
    Now he reminds me of...
    Well, I can't remember.
    Oh! My radio!!! From Program Terminated.
    Every so slightly.
    He's not as grumbly!!
    Awesome work!
    Ooo... you could do one on a super-strong person, who can't control their strength and ends up accidentally leaning on a door and knocking down a building!!! :mrgreen:
    March 31st, 2009 at 11:21pm
  • xXGreyWingsXx

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    WOW! I've only just gotten round to reading this, and I love it to pieces!
    I'm definitely subscribing in case you write any more.
    I love Tela, she's totally in character.
    And I love the plot; how did you think of that?
    Such an inversion of the typical wearing down that you associate with asylums.
    Reminds me slightly of The Silence of the Lambs and Hannibal Lector!

    *off to read Claude*
    March 31st, 2009 at 11:16pm
  • love potion

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    I love your writing style.
    March 14th, 2009 at 12:01am
  • saxophonesandmcr

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    I really like the idea and it's well written, I'll be checking for more! This is the first story I've read on mibba that isn't a fanfic
    March 12th, 2009 at 11:51pm
  • ShaleseRayEen

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    I really like this story so far and I can't wait for the next one.
    :)
    March 12th, 2009 at 11:38pm