The Kiss - Comments

this was fantastic
not much more i can say about it [:

For something so short, that was wonderfully done.

:cheese:
That was perfection.
I don't think it could have been done better had Cupid written it himself.
I love the way you describe every detail. I don't know, the way you do it is just so breathtaking.
Really, you should post more stories on mibba. I'm in love with your writing.

I like this :] It was very well written and really sweet.

Very nicely executed :]

It really was beautiful. It was a great story. Those moments in time are hard to capture in words, but you did it. Good job.:con:

I must second what wednesday said. That has got to be in the top 3 best written pieces I have come across on here. Brava!

That was the very meaning of the phrase: quality not quantity. It was beautiful
xo