Giving Up. - Comments

  • Popular.

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    I should hate you for making Jonne suffer =[

    Well, there's not a lot I can say. You nearly made me cry - and whoever knows me could tell you I'm far from being the most sensitive person in this world x)
    But still, poor Jonne.
    January 21st, 2011 at 03:54am
  • LoveIsMyWeapon

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    sad but strong.
    and I love the last words.
    I still love him.
    Good job.
    June 30th, 2009 at 05:30am
  • lee lee black.

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    Lamely enough, 'absolutely fantastic' are the only two words that I can come up with to describe this one shot.

    There is a strong sense of reality in each emotion and image in here that can only be attributed to your talent as a writer.

    The narrator is speaking to Kristian but the reader, who is obviously not Kristian, feels every ounce of the guilt. An accomplishment that speaks volumes about you.

    The end, for me, is bittersweet and not completely finite and yet it is the most logical and powerful foreseeable ending.

    Job more than well done.
    May 16th, 2009 at 08:25am
  • screamedlullaby

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    is it weird that i really like this?
    more soon
    April 4th, 2009 at 03:40pm