Count the Shadows - Comments

My god, this was incredible.
You had me hooked from start to finish. I was sucked into this little world that you'd created, and I was dying to learn more about the two characters.
This could turn into something longer, chaptered, with a bit of development. Maybe even a book. =D

Well done, Dani-o <3

You won second place! And now I know why!
(Really, we should have been switched)
I absolutely loved loved loved absolutely adored it!
-sigh-
It was just amazing. ;D

:D
you're amazing, love.

it was so dark, but that's what made it so intriguing....excellenntt :]

It was so cynacally amazing. :tehe:

Her view on the world and those around her was just so...so evil, but I loved it. She had to kill, that was her purpose, and she did it quite well. The way the shadows radiated out of her body and into that of her victim was just so clever, very original.

Dmitiri was so dark and cloaked in mystery, but the way he followed her, it was as if she intrigued him. I loved how you bonded the two together through her mark. The shadow and the shade... It just sounds so perfectly evil.

I loved how you wrote the piece, and the portrayal of your characters was very well done. Good job, deary! :hug: