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  • astoryseldomtold

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    Loved it. Poor Wyatt. :S Please don't run away and try and find him....Or do...

    And yeah super pscyched for Green day and I DIDN'T EVEN KNOW ABOUT A USED CD!! OMG!

    XX

    P.S Please update again soon :)
    May 7th, 2009 at 09:32pm
  • Alice Verney

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    poor wyatt
    May 7th, 2009 at 02:57am
  • bruise pristine

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    *Looks at comment above.*
    Wow.
    Awesomesauce?
    Ha!
    Okay, back to your story.
    This chapter...ehh.
    Not much happened, but it was still good.
    I just can't wait until Frank tells Wyatt about Mikey.
    And, aw, I missed Mikey in this chapter.
    May 6th, 2009 at 11:38pm
  • OxyG

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    1. you double posted =[
    2. can is steal those "lyrics"???? PLZ?! if you don't want them, that is.
    3. =O CLAY IS HOT. and
    4. Frank needs to sit Wyatt down and tell him all about Mikey, and then Wyatt will be like, "noes wayz, look at dis, i drawed dis dood frum mah dreemz, daddy....dis Mikey?! awesomesauce."
    May 4th, 2009 at 07:53am
  • s u p e r h u m a n

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    Oh man it's been a while since I've been on! I see I've missed a lot. I still don't like Gerard. He seems a bit delusional to me, like he's the one imagining things not Frank.
    Oh Wyatt, that poor child. He's so scared and confused and I just want to jump in there and give him a hug, if he were real that is. Oh God, I'm sorry for my late comment but keep up the good work!

    Wink
    April 30th, 2009 at 04:52pm
  • Nothing_At_All

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    Aww! I want to keep Wyatt and Clay all to myself! I'd love to give them those "good-old-fashioned-Emily-hugs" I mentioned once. You know, the ones with the groping and squeezing and such.

    So...what's next?!?! Will I squee more, or will I cry?!?! I MUST KNOW! OH PLEASE TELL ME DEAR CHOSEN ONE!!!

    Thank you so much for the wonderful update Meggy!
    April 30th, 2009 at 02:47am
  • bruise pristine

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    Heh.
    You uploaded chapter six twice.
    Oh and I have one more question.
    So, Mikey might have made it if in "Baby Steps" if Gerard wouldn't have pulled the plug?
    That's the one part I'm really confused on.
    April 30th, 2009 at 12:25am
  • RainBow BalLooN

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    more more more more more!!!!!!!!!
    April 29th, 2009 at 11:12pm
  • Angelus.

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    (you posted it twice :XD)

    Oh wow.. that was such a great chapter! Clap
    Really awesome =D

    There were just a few grammar mistakes to do with tenses and stuff... feel free to message me if you like, but they weren't that bad :cute:

    Can't wait for more - I love this story! In Love :arms:
    April 29th, 2009 at 08:57pm
  • astoryseldomtold

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    Awww :) *hugs*

    Wow I think even I might have been shocked if one of my friends told me that.
    Clay seems so nice. And Wyatt finally has someone :D

    Please keep writing, you know we love it when you do :)
    April 29th, 2009 at 07:56pm
  • never take me alive

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    awwwww wyatt is in love......
    his relationship with frank and clay is wicked.
    gerard is a meanie!
    keep on writing !!!! dont stop!!!!!!!!! :D
    April 29th, 2009 at 02:09pm
  • SmurfFromHell

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    Awwww sweet!
    April 29th, 2009 at 11:34am
  • Devihla

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    Yay! Now Wyatt can be happy!!
    I do have to point out to you that this is the first "not-really-a-fan-fic"-story that I'm reading! And it's so good!! 'Cause it's like I already know Wyatt... But I don't... :P
    Anyway! :s I love this!!
    April 29th, 2009 at 09:38am
  • Eugene.

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    sorry i haven't commented in a while. but i'm so happy these comments help you. it's awesome to get updates but i think it's even better to have more happy people in the world, eh? Great chapter! i like things from Wyatt's perspective. it's going great so far! =]
    April 29th, 2009 at 05:19am
  • Alice Verney

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    awww go wyatt and clay
    April 29th, 2009 at 01:40am
  • bruise pristine

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    So, I've just figured out that I don't know how to spell 'subscribes' in my past message.

    Now back to the story....
    Wyatt's a hermaphrodite too?
    Far out man.
    So....when is he going to tell Clay that he is a hermaphrodite?
    Because I sure as hell didn't hear it in the dialog!
    That is the question I need answered.
    Oh, and one more question.
    How in blue blazes is Gerard going to react to the spilling of that huge secret?
    Not to awesomely, I presume.
    April 29th, 2009 at 12:59am
  • pomkitten

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    yay! now wyatt has a sweetheart
    April 29th, 2009 at 12:57am
  • don't hesitate.

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    le squee

    JesusMaryofChristFuck

    Amazing update
    April 29th, 2009 at 12:56am
  • Slightly.Psycopathic

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    THIS JUST KEEPS GETTING BETTER AND SADDER!
    Wow, Frank, get him out of there!
    And that dream was...GAH!
    I almost cried, thinking that Mikey was just something in Frank's head.
    April 28th, 2009 at 10:55am
  • Alice Verney

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    i still hate gerard
    April 28th, 2009 at 05:08am