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  • rathlora

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    did u kno Akito is actually a girl? yeah, a girl. But only in the manga so dont worry!
    August 10th, 2009 at 05:10pm
  • foreverbooks

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    can i give you just a lil advise?

    it would sound better if you didnt say you when your talking about the main character it could confuse ppl and you wont get a lot of attention to the story.

    and sorry i was to straight foward about it...
    August 7th, 2009 at 02:20am
  • wolfprincess

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    I would love some help. Any tips you have or any ideas that you have would be great
    May 2nd, 2009 at 01:55am
  • Sadeyes

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    sounds good, let me know if you want some help
    :)
    April 30th, 2009 at 10:44am
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