Twins - Comments

I think I really enjoyed this one because I absolutely adore the concept of twins. But you managed to make it even better and I'm so jealous that you can manage to write such minor details so well. You can make a conversation magical and that's truly amazing :)

There's not much to say. I love the whole series.

And you are Wonderland <3

This is amazing! I loved it.

i really like the series, there really good. Love alice in wounderland

I don’t know if this counts? But I’m commenting it since it’s a one-shot.
I really liked this. I don’t know how to explain it really. All I know is that I can’t fully comprehend the beauty of this, and how amazing you made Ryan seem throughout it. I like how you made him keep mentioning that you guys were twins. I liked it. I just wish I could put it into words. I’m speechless pretty much; I hope that counts.

What I like least about it, is that it reminds me of Twilight with the whole Edward Cullen stuff . And the background . . . it’s a bit messy for me. I know it matches the banner and captures her thought process I presume; but it’s a bitch messy . But I do like the layout as a whole.

The music wouldn’t play. I have to point that out. Other then that, you’re a marvelous writer :cute: I hope you make that your ambition; to become an author.

Wonderland and words. <3

I really loved the way Ryan talked to this person. He just knows.

Honestly, that was completely gorgeous. The way they were talking about Dru she seemed like a child, but you could almost feel the love Ryan had for her radiating out of his words. He just knew her so well, it's so... beautiful, the concept of their relationship.
Although very little is described and we don't know who Ryan's talking to, in this case, it's almost like less is more. It left so much open to interpretation, and for a story with only a few hundred words, trying to cram in loads of description can ruin it.
You did this perfectly. No exaggeration. I loved it.

Wow for something so short it was magical. You have a real talent for writing. I look forward to reading more new stuff from you.
The banner rocked too

I just read all of them and Dru, they are so beautiful

If you write anymore, please can you drop me a comment? They're magical :cute:

I liked it.
It was very interesting.

New story.
351 word drabble.
Ryan speaks about Dru.
Part of the "Conversations in Dreamworld" series.

Happy [?] reading!

xoxox
-Dru