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  • MarriahShadz

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    I really loved chapter 23.
    I think you did a great job of getting Matt's thoughts across.
    And how could you end it like that?
    It just leaves so many questions.
    What's going to happen to Matt?
    What's going to happen with Johnny and the guys?
    Is Matt going to come back?
    What's going to happen now?
    January 20th, 2010 at 12:36am
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    Catching up on all the updates I missed.
    I cannot believe that Brian just did that to Matt. Getting all up in his face and demanding that Matt suck his blood. That was balls-y and kinda weird.
    Why can't they just accept it like Johnny did?
    I hate this seperation.
    Going back to finish up now.
    January 19th, 2010 at 11:13pm
  • SillyFrench

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    Is it really over? Like, is it gone forever? :O
    *feels like crying*
    How could you end it like that? Poor Johnny! and Matt!
    What are they going to do?
    You're not doing any sequel, are you? :(

    Fine, I'll just have to deal with the fact that it's over...

    I loved both stories, they were awesome,... something else... =]
    And can't wait to read more of Sin =D

    <3
    December 5th, 2009 at 11:03pm
  • SillyFrench

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    when you say: almost the end...
    what do you mean exactly? how many chapters left? :O
    Maybe Matt will turn Johnny into a vampire too? so they hang out together and stuff... maybe even the rest of them, Matt wil turn the whole group, including Val and Leanna XD
    okay... maybe not ><"
    Loved the update! look forward to more :)
    November 22nd, 2009 at 07:31pm
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    I loved the update, and I'm seriously wondering how it will end!
    I have no idea what's going to happen in the next chapter =]
    Loved the update! can't wait for more!
    <3
    November 21st, 2009 at 10:02am
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    Damn, I thought it would be okay when they all started laughing and everything...
    why did Brian had to open his damn mouth! ><"
    Loved the update! look forward to more! =D
    <3
    November 15th, 2009 at 10:30am
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    Fuck...
    Johnny is the best ever =D I love him for calling Matt and telling to come to the bar with them, except that he never mentionned that the others would be there too...
    I have a feeling this won't end well...
    Loved the update though, as always! and I look forward to more =D
    November 6th, 2009 at 10:49pm
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    aww! I loved the update! XD
    Poor Johnny's really tired!
    And lmao at Jimmy & Brian's crazyness!
    Just gotta love them!

    Can't wait for more!
    <3
    October 20th, 2009 at 07:08pm
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    haha! I loved the update! :D
    Poor Brian, he's scared for is friend, but I'd be too.
    I mean, it's shortshit we are talking about ^^"
    Loved the update, look forward to more!
    <3
    October 15th, 2009 at 07:00pm
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    God that sounded so stupid, vampire matters?
    yeah Shortshit! :D
    I'm so glad you updated, I've been waiting for this ;)
    Loved it and I hope you'll get to update real soon!
    <3
    October 11th, 2009 at 03:31pm
  • MarriahShadz

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    Been waiting for an update.
    I was so excited to see that there was an update for this.
    I missed it.
    I'm just glad that Matt seemed to be a little happier talking with one of his friends that he'd been missing.
    Just hoping that Jimmy doesn't find out about Matt and Leana's visit and that Johnny set it up.
    I don't think Jimmy would be too excited to find out that his wife was hanging out with a vampire, even if it is Matt. ... that looks so funny, never thought I'd say something like that.
    October 11th, 2009 at 04:07am
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    Johnny is so lazy. :D
    Seriously though, the guys have to get over the whole "Matt's a vampire thing."
    He's still Matt, he's still one of their best friends.
    I'm surprised that Jimmy is being so stubborn about this.
    Definitely looking forward to the next update.
    September 6th, 2009 at 04:07am
  • SillyFrench

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    XD
    Shortshit running in the park with Peanut :)
    I like Johnny's idea, he should try to get Leanna and Matt to talk a little bit, and if things get better, maybe the guys can 'accidentally' meet up in a bar. Go Shortshit! XD
    As always, I loved the update ;) and I'll be waiting patiently for the next one since I know you will be updating "Is it such a sin" more often :)
    August 26th, 2009 at 04:16pm
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    What was Michelle thinking? Why would kissing Johnny on the cheek make Brian jealous? If she really wanted to make him jealous, she would sleep with one of Brian's friends.
    August 14th, 2009 at 02:27pm
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    Loved the update; as always :D
    that's not nice of them to leave Johnny to clean the mess all by himself, poor shortshit XD
    Loved it, can't wait for more!
    August 12th, 2009 at 01:28pm
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    Short but awesome.
    I wish the guys would just talk to Matt and see that nothing has really changed...well, except for the fact that Matt likes to drink blood now.
    August 10th, 2009 at 09:41pm
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    I feel so bad for Matt, and the guys are just being stupid :(
    but Johnny is awesome as always =D
    I loved the chapter, can't wait for more! :)
    August 7th, 2009 at 09:03am
  • MarriahShadz

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    I feel so bad for Matt. He is just so lonely.
    Can't wait for the next one though, hopefully the guys will be like Johnny and start to talk to Matt again. He needs his friends.
    August 5th, 2009 at 12:44am
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    Chapter 13 was hilarious! :XD
    Johnny is so funny when he's drunk.
    August 5th, 2009 at 12:37am
  • SillyFrench

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    I feel so bad for Matt! :(
    Johnny is awesome :D
    Loved the update, can't wait for more!
    August 1st, 2009 at 08:35am