Touch - Comments

Wow. Very powerful, and very well-written as well. :) Good job writing this. :)

tHIS WAS WONDERFUL SADLY I CAN RELATE

Oh my gosh....this is good.....it was as if it was me telling people about the experience....its very intense

That was really quite something, really deep and thought provoking

I really like how you used second person, it made it seem for personal to the reader and even to the character because, as you use the writing it down reference at the end, it made it feel like she was letting all her feelings out.

From the critical side though, there was a few tense mistakes but they were hardly noticeable. But for example, "You remember one day he lied down next to you in your bed" should really be "You remember one day he lay down next to you in your bed" but that's really it!

You have such a beautiful writing technique, keep it up xD

Gen xxxx

So it's really random that i decided to read this but I'm glad i did.

It was beautiful.

So touching and I really could feel the emotions of the character. It was sad to read this and, honestly, it made me cry; in a good way of course.

You're writing is very powerful! Never give it up; you have a wonderful talent!

~Nikki~