Not Another One-Shot! - Comments

"To fraternize with the enemy more often?” Charlotte replied smartly.

Hahahahahaaaaa. That line was hilarious.
I laughed out loud, seriously.
Well done.

Haha. Yes, fraternizing with the enemy more often seems like a great idea.
Hehe. I loved it!

I really like this, and the teaseing that goes with it.
I kind of agree with not having sex in the kitchen though.

Claps for you,
its hard to find decent femmeslash.

Thankoo!

Yeah, I prefer girlsex over boysex =]

I loved it ;]

Woooooo go girlsex!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I prefer this to boysex. Yes im weird and I know it!!!

Brilliant
There needs to be way more femmeslash out there

woo.
i loved it
there needs to me more of this slash here.
;D

That was amazing.

I loved it.

--Laila.

I love you for writing this kind of stuff.
We need more of it!!!
Although, I would of wanted them to have sex in the kitchen.
Fuck the neighbors!! :D
Well, then again, last time i kissed my (ex)girlfriend in public, some old lady started yellling at us and mumbling something about the devil.
Well, anyways, I loved it!

Eh, this is probably just going to be a bunch of one shots where all of them are girl sex . xD

GAH! that was super hot =X
more, pwease?

i agree with X_Sharnee
why can't u write more??

woah... why be mean and make it a one shot?

That... was... hott! I love it! Gah, I ish people would write more girlsex! There's not enough of it!

ohhh nice something diffrent i love it. hehe