Shattered In Pieces - Comments

xD "You're a monster!"

Whoo bruital fight!
Does that mean their back together?

update!! or the battle over blue jello will happen sooner. lol
=]

He lost Jill? Literaly!
Where'd she go?

Quite frankly, I think Ash knows more than she's told us thus far.

I need more updates to keep me entertained while I babysit =). I read during her naps!

That's a messed up family! Wow...

Well I had a bunch to say for this, but it all went away and the only question that's running through my mind is "What the hell is up with Jill?!"

OH NO!!! update!!!!!=]

That certainly wasn't the way to handle that...damn, Jimmy. I hope he comes to his senses and corrects this mistake he just made.

This should be interesting. If Jimmy's smart, he can talk her down and get home. If he gives in...I fear the fall out from that!

Being sick is a good excuse not to update, me thinks. I have writer's block...

Interesting update. I'm interested to see what happens with Jill and meds.

this is amazing so far!
I like it
a lot like high school
subbing fo sho.

Jill sounds like a fun person! I'm very interested to see where this goes =). It's been a long time since I was in high school (freshman year 1993, anyone?), so this is fun to get back to the antics of high school =).

*subscribes*

All of your stuff is good. Is "Blackend Sight" coming along any time soon?

Good start here. It will be interesting to see what happens. I could see her just gauging a reaction (I've asked my SO such questions before), or she could be serious. I'm interested to see more.

Amazingly awesome DUDE!!! update pwease!!!!! =]

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