This was incredibly sad. I couldn't help but let some tears slip down my eyes.
Your descriptions are amazing, and your use of a second person point of view is rather refreshing. I've rarely seen this kind of point of view work, but it did marvels with your story; it made me feel like I actually was the main character, like it actually was my life.
Incredibly written and so full with emotions; I congratulate you for this wonderful piece
Your descriptions are amazing, and your use of a second person point of view is rather refreshing. I've rarely seen this kind of point of view work, but it did marvels with your story; it made me feel like I actually was the main character, like it actually was my life.
Incredibly written and so full with emotions; I congratulate you for this wonderful piece