July 3rd, 2009 at 01:37pm
Living Manhattan. - Comments
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interesting. extremely interesting. more please?!June 30th, 2009 at 05:52am
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^ You're... forgiven, Erk. :XD
It's quite creative how you piece up this story. Methodical, massive, and exquisite, I must say. Very simple in detail, but simplicity always works out best at most times. And it is handsomely mounted.
How it could make the moon look like a star that was shining just a little brighter than the others, how it could make the stars looked like they touched the ground, how it could make city lights look like big, bright dots.
Brings back memories of New York when I still lived in such a world. And it is an amazing feeling, to read both that excerpt and remember a breathtaking past.
...feel like he was on top of the world, and when you're pretty much the exact opposite, that's a pretty amazing thing to feel.
That was my favorite line to read. It seemed fresh to the mind, and made me visualize a perfect image of an imperfect but satisfactory world. Amazing, and inspiring.
I might post stuff here after all.June 27th, 2009 at 03:45pm -
^ Oh yeah, the layout. I love it, I forgot to tell you. Thank you, Ally for regenerating my brain cells. :cute:June 27th, 2009 at 03:31pm
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My expertise in crtique has faded slightly, but bear with me, I beg of you.
The descriptions were straightforward and fluid. And the subtle humor as you narrate the story bind the entire thing together. I'll be looking forward to this. Plus I like the layout, man. :XDJune 23rd, 2009 at 03:44pm -
First comment for me !
This started well enough, I liked how you described everything so well.
Update, matt ! June 23rd, 2009 at 06:57am
& Ally, you saying that you'll start posting stories again made my day.