When green day is playing make billie pull Erika on stage. After that, ...idk...Haha they could.......make tre' wanna go to sky high. :) Erika could fall get hurt then Billie would save her!! Haha idk :) trying to help lol
I liked the update and sex scenes would be fine. I wouldn't be terribly disapointed if u keep it the rating now, but naughtiness is fun. ;) Update again!!!
I just read this entire story in ten minutes... I'm a fast reader. :P EPICALLY AWESOME STORY! There are too few really good Green Day fanfics on this site. This and a story called "21 Guns" top my list. And I'm seeing American Idiot on Broadway again too! Saturday.
There were cute comments, little bits of cliche- good and bad. Winning and losing moments, smirking and laughing moments. This story is packed with drama, keeping your readers on their toes, excited to see what you'll come up with next for the characters. It was pretty cool and while with a few typos here and there, it was otherwise pretty well structured. I'm glad for the chance to read, and please keep up with the writing! You have serious talent. :D