Goodbye My Love and Life - Comments

  • Cry
    This was so tragic!
    How can someone tell another that they don’t love them back, and then come back looking for redemption? That’s not fair; poor boy! I wanna jump in there and hug because he didn’t deserve that.
    I think what made me enjoy this story was the way you described it; there’s the description of the narrator, but not any particular mention to the loved one; there are no names mentioned and all the magic of secrets and imagination lies here; I loved that, seriously.
    And your writing skills are pretty good; I should read more of your stuff!

    Thanks for such a tragic, yet magic and imaginative story (:
    July 9th, 2009 at 04:55pm
  • total sniff!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Cry
    Smiley i thought you would like it
    :hand: Ricochet (that is spelt right) not quite camp enought to be Leo
    muchly love
    July 7th, 2009 at 07:54pm