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  • CeraRachel

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    GAH.
    I don't even know what to do with myself.
    That was lovely.
    January 24th, 2011 at 10:52pm
  • blue.

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    Ffdjskfjsd. You described Billie so well.
    I had a delirious smile on my face the whole time.
    And I love the way you did the ending about the gum.
    I don't know why. I just love those types of random, meaningful, short endings.
    Well done, well done.
    November 10th, 2009 at 08:00pm
  • Talk Tonight

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    Wow, that was brilliant. Very hard hitting and emotional, I liked it very much.
    October 28th, 2009 at 02:10am
  • Syd Barrett.

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    ^ Don't worry, I pictured Billie too. Probably because of the green eyes.

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    Interesting. Second-person stories are rare, and it's cool that you pulled it off here. It tells you a lot with few words.
    July 31st, 2009 at 04:37am
  • Billie Joe Armstrong

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    That was good, Sruti. I liked it. :cute:
    Short and sweet....why did my brain automatically picture Billie? :shifty
    July 3rd, 2009 at 02:49am
  • Chewy Cheese

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    Aww, haha that was incredibly good =]
    June 28th, 2009 at 07:05pm