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GAH.
I don't even know what to do with myself.
That was lovely.

Ffdjskfjsd. You described Billie so well.
I had a delirious smile on my face the whole time.
And I love the way you did the ending about the gum.
I don't know why. I just love those types of random, meaningful, short endings.
Well done, well done.

Wow, that was brilliant. Very hard hitting and emotional, I liked it very much.

^ Don't worry, I pictured Billie too. Probably because of the green eyes.

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Interesting. Second-person stories are rare, and it's cool that you pulled it off here. It tells you a lot with few words.

That was good, Sruti. I liked it. :cute:
Short and sweet....why did my brain automatically picture Billie? :shifty

Aww, haha that was incredibly good =]