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  • youleftme.

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    OH MY GOODNESS. THIS WAS BEYOND AMAZING. everyone comment please! I need the next chapter!
    August 29th, 2010 at 05:57am
  • blackroses03

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    Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes :) More please!!
    August 29th, 2010 at 05:37am
  • SoWrongItsPretty

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    WOW!!UPDATE AGAIN!!
    August 29th, 2010 at 05:33am
  • HONEST MISTAKES

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    I didn't realize you updated this until now...
    I love, love love it :D You kick butt. Oh, and
    I wonder who that chick with Caleb is...
    but anyways I think you should update soon!
    August 27th, 2010 at 01:39am
  • forgottenships

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    what happend to John and Lucy having another baby.
    August 22nd, 2010 at 08:01pm
  • Chachachloe

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    Hi new reader here. Just read this in an hour and a half. POST MORE SOON OH MY FUCKING GAWD! I am addicted. I hate reading incomplete stories cause I get so hooked then have to wait for updates. But seriously, this is awesome <3
    August 19th, 2010 at 02:36am
  • leaveyouhigh

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    p.s. Wow, I used love in just about every sentence.
    That defientely says something(:
    August 17th, 2010 at 06:03am
  • leaveyouhigh

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    I just spent the last few hours reading this.
    It is amazing!
    I am actually upset I didn't find it earlier(:
    I love this, it's so different and well written.
    And Oh my God, it has amazing bands in it, I love it!
    I love this story so very much.
    I hope you update soon so I can love it even more.
    -Hannah(:
    August 17th, 2010 at 06:02am
  • L. Shecks

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    I just read this entiiire thing. :) I love it! All through it I was Team John Oh. :)
    I can proof-read things for you if you want. I'm alright at that type of stuff... not promising perfection though.. haha.
    In the chapter where she said, "I haven't been taking me birth control" I TOTALLY caught on to something, I hope I'm not right though. So here it goes: She has sex with Caleb when she was off birth control... so she's gonna get pregnant with his baby again.
    I really hope I'm not right. :P Update soon?
    August 16th, 2010 at 09:10am
  • LizzaFrizza555e

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    lovelovelove the story! team john forever! update sooonnn:)
    August 10th, 2010 at 06:32am
  • Sincerely-Angela

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    lol i love how alex is getting a mani/pedi with her
    August 5th, 2010 at 10:56pm
  • Apollo 13

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    Alex makes me laugh in this one.
    The phone call with Mara was great!
    August 5th, 2010 at 09:25pm
  • emmalovesit

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    hetjgksdhga. this is gooood.
    team john:D!
    August 5th, 2010 at 02:49pm
  • bitterxperfume

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    Team Alex
    August 5th, 2010 at 09:05am
  • lizzyXdaproduca

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    i just subscribed :) i love this
    i am so team caleb.
    August 5th, 2010 at 08:12am
  • ShutUpChristine

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    I like the story update(;
    The pedicure scene was hilarious to me, haha. I could imagine Alex getting one, it would be pretty funny. ;D
    I think she should stay with John. Alex is more like a best friend that acts like a girl and helps you with your problems, lol.
    Anyways, update soon<3
    August 5th, 2010 at 07:56am
  • Nialls Freckles

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    my oh my Mr. Turman is out on a date?
    and Lucy just can't help herself but to watch him, hope he isn't doing the wrong thing...
    ...by being with someone that's not her perhaps?
    ah
    i'm in love.
    please update really soon.
    August 5th, 2010 at 06:06am
  • DinoKat

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    I love how Alex is all "meh whatev" about mara's whole spicy time with jack lmao
    Good chapter
    August 5th, 2010 at 05:59am
  • HONEST MISTAKES

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    Yay :] I love the update. More soon please!!!
    July 31st, 2010 at 05:32am
  • Nialls Freckles

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    he must be up to something! update soon! I need to know!
    July 31st, 2010 at 02:48am
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