Your Safe Now Baby. - Comments

its good hun, want to see more

Its good, get the feeling that she will see josh at the party but with a spin . . . with someone else or something.
keep up the good work x x

I like it so far :)
Update soon!
*subscribes*

awww i loved it
to short though!!!!
updatee!!!!!

=) ty for your comments,
next chap will be up either today or tomorow
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yay! the new ch. dam he's pretty convincing of being better. cant wait till the next one!

its good

:O Need More!!! awesome chapters :)

Great stuff!
Sadly i think he should find out. That way we can test if he's telling the truth, which he's probably not :(

aww good chapter
idk...
but updatee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

8D next please...

yeah, well next chapter should be up tonight =/

He shouldnt find out until after the party so she has some enjoyment, maybe there could be a new person there boy or girl who sees the bruises and guesses what is going on and lets her know they have been through the same thing.

Its really good so far keep it up x x

He Should Find Out :O

its good i like it

Cool Cool Story Gemma MORE PLEASE!! MORE!!!

So what do you think :D