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  • kati89

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    i absolutely loved this chapter! very well written. i love how marc and jordan both care for her, but in different ways. so cute.

    update soon please please please!
    November 15th, 2009 at 08:27am
  • Jessica;

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    Can I have two Staal brothers looking out for me, please?
    I wish I was that lucky.
    <3
    November 15th, 2009 at 06:46am
  • into.the.rush

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    Jordan Staal is love.
    :)
    Such a sweetie.
    November 15th, 2009 at 05:50am
  • someone1330

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    OH YA UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HAHA lol i was gonna go to bed that i decied to cheack my email and i was like oh ya! ahah love the update nice job. Its so cute how abigal feel asleep in his arms : )
    November 15th, 2009 at 05:46am
  • snowboarder79

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    Great chapter =)
    I thought Jordan was really sweet at the end when he told Marc, that he would never hurt her...
    And I still love that Marc is so protective of her.
    Anyways, amazing job with this story <3
    November 15th, 2009 at 05:24am
  • snowboarder79

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    You did such an amazing job with this chapter, and for being out of your element you still did an awesome job writing it.
    I'm happy she finally opened up to Jordan, and I'm sooo happy that she didn't get angry at him for kissing her. Because when he did that, I was scared that she was gonna flip at him.
    But again, fabulous job ! This was my favorite chapter yet <3
    November 2nd, 2009 at 08:54pm
  • urbanfan4ever

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    Ditto sketchtastic!
    November 2nd, 2009 at 04:19pm
  • scute

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    So. Good.
    I loved this chapter so much.
    I'm so glad she finally opened up to jordan.
    Gah, I don't even know what to say besides I loved it!
    November 2nd, 2009 at 01:49pm
  • someone1330

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    awsome chapter thnks!
    November 2nd, 2009 at 01:10pm
  • roxy278

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    That was some intense stuff.
    Now that Abigail has opened up hopefully she can
    trust Jordan. He is so sweet with the kiss at the
    end I couldn't help but aw at that part.
    More soon! =]
    November 2nd, 2009 at 07:41am
  • Yakitori

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    That was a pretty intense chapter. I hope that there are more to come.
    November 2nd, 2009 at 07:19am
  • Jessica;

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    Quite possibly my favorite chapter yet.
    I may have said that about a previous chapter but I lied.
    This one was amazing and I think you did the situation justice.
    I hope Abigail feels like she can trust Jordan now.
    And the kiss and everything was so sweet.
    More soon. <3
    November 2nd, 2009 at 05:47am
  • Rylie_

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    Love love love this story!

    Update soon!
    October 21st, 2009 at 03:47am
  • snowboarder79

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    Great chapter ! I'm so excited for the next one ! <3
    October 19th, 2009 at 12:34pm
  • scute

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    I don't know where I've been or why I haven't read this in so long
    But I just caught up from like chapter ten and cometely love ALL of it!!
    I'm so glad she's starting to open up or people, physically and emotionally.
    And Jordan seems so genuine, I hope he doesn't mess it up!!
    October 19th, 2009 at 05:31am
  • Jessica;

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    I like that you have her be all good but then even the slightest thing triggers discomfort.
    It's definitely realistic.
    More soon. <3
    October 19th, 2009 at 05:24am
  • roxy278

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    Can't wait till the next one!
    October 19th, 2009 at 04:52am
  • Chickydee6

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    Yay update!!
    I loved it - can't wait for the next one :)
    October 19th, 2009 at 04:37am
  • dreamerforever

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    That was a really cute chapter! I hope you have fun at the game! I wanted to go to the season opener last night, but of course, I couldn't.
    October 3rd, 2009 at 07:52pm
  • katiedontcry

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    that was cute. and have fun at the game, you have great seats!
    October 3rd, 2009 at 06:24pm
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