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  • little motorkitty;

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    I liked this chapter. I really like how her brother hates the Joker, that should definetly stay in the story. I think it would be good if the more Elizabeth falls for the Joker, the more Jacob hates him. But yeah, just an idea.

    And O-M-G are they going to be official girlfriend-boyfriend? I think it's cute how you show the Joker isn't completely evil and still falls in love. It's really good.
    August 16th, 2009 at 02:03am
  • little motorkitty;

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    Love it :-) Keep up the good work :D
    August 5th, 2009 at 11:34pm
  • Harleen Winchester.

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    =] Love it. Update?
    August 4th, 2009 at 04:00am
  • Calling.the.Storm

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    Hello! I just read the first chapter of your story and it was very interesting! I like to read stories, anything with danger. So far so good and good writing skills!
    August 2nd, 2009 at 11:35pm
  • Shatterheart

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    Wow, this story is very good! I've only read the first chapter so far, and I'm already captivated by the plot!

    I love how you wrote the first chapter. It clearly 'shows' the readers the close relationship between Elizabeth and Jacob, through the dialogue of the cell phone, and reactions to plot on Elizabeth's side.
    I also appreciate the fact that it was well written, with no chat-speak or errors. Thank you!!

    AND...haha, and absolutely loved the Joker quotes you put in there... that was intentional, right? Anyway, it was brilliant, and I loved it.

    Only read the first chapter and I'm commenting, this is awesome!!
    On to the next chapter for me...

    ~K
    August 2nd, 2009 at 11:09pm
  • El!zabeth-Rawr!

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    Keep updating; I absoluty love it, don't stop =D
    August 2nd, 2009 at 08:25am
  • little motorkitty;

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    God, loved the newest chapters :mrgreen: well done
    The Joker sounds so.... :yah
    Update soon, I'm dying to know what's going to happen :D

    -x-
    July 30th, 2009 at 08:14pm
  • El!zabeth-Rawr!

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    Update soon please :) I love this story, it's one of my favorites out of all the one's I'm subscribed to!! You're really good <3
    July 30th, 2009 at 05:24am
  • lydiajudith

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    CandyFloss!:
    :O love it <3
    -subscribes-

    Please update soon!
    I'm working on a chapter right now, I'll have it posted as soon as I can Yes
    July 24th, 2009 at 10:00pm
  • little motorkitty;

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    :O love it <3
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    Please update soon!
    July 24th, 2009 at 04:03pm
  • lydiajudith

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    HaleyHazard:
    I love it so far, keep updating :)
    Awh, thank you :arms:
    July 24th, 2009 at 04:51am
  • El!zabeth-Rawr!

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    I love it so far, keep updating :)
    July 24th, 2009 at 04:33am