June 6th, 2011 at 08:00am
Wow!! I log on to read "Marked with Silence", but this catches my interest first.
That was really good! Very suspenseful. You kinda get a hint about halfway through of what she's planning, but you don't give it away all at once. Really good!
The only suggestion i can make is for the font. it's really hard to read, and i had to copy and paste it into a msg box on here in order to read it. but it was well worth the effort!
im hoping you're planning on continuing this...
It took my breath away when I read the ending.
This is an amazing story. Excellent Job.(: