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  • xoxoxomgw

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    Oh my god. You are AN AMAZING WRITER! seriously! I love this story and i love the way you write. Its really too good. And i mean it, you can write novels lol. <3
    Update soonish hopefully! n_n
    November 6th, 2010 at 03:02pm
  • synthian.

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    I knew there was summat up with Syn from the very beginning. And I suspect that he may have killed Emily.

    Intensely enjoying the story. There were so many unexpected twists that threw me off but there were some obvious pointers to balance it out. I like that. Also, it wasn't your cliche girl fall in love with a Avenged member, deals with psycho ex girlfriend, get pregnant, go on tour, gets married story. I am getting sick of those kind of stories. So, I'm enjoying this one. Good job. (:
    November 3rd, 2010 at 10:52am
  • artemis1883

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    Just read the whole thing. Um, whoa. Can't wait for the next chapter... Total cliffhanger, and I can't handle it!!! I knew Syn was up to something the whole time!
    Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    October 29th, 2010 at 09:51pm
  • blueyes775

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    Omg I just read this whole story.. please update.. You cant leave at that...
    October 27th, 2010 at 05:21am
  • Black_Dahlia

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    I love this story, I've been hooked since chapter one. Please update soon,
    October 26th, 2010 at 03:19am
  • Perfect Exceeder

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    this chapter makes me kindof sick. like i dont know, its just... *shivers*
    ohwell. i hope it gets better
    October 24th, 2010 at 04:40am
  • Miss Jackie

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    Two words: Holy. Fuck.

    More soon? I wanna read what's gunna happen and I'm incredibly antsy :) love your writing!!
    October 23rd, 2010 at 03:49am
  • XtremeFairy

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    Wow I kinda feel bad for Emma I mean I think that Matt was a little harsh on her I mean I understand why he's mad. He saw his "best-friend" and girl kissing and it torn him up really good. As for Syn I think he plan this to happen that way he can have Emma for himself.
    Amazing update :)
    October 22nd, 2010 at 11:54pm
  • Tilers Haner

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    I'm not entirely sure why, but I can't seem to gather words to comment properly on this chapter! I'm confused, scared, worried, sad...
    I just don't know!
    Amazing update though Hun, can't wait for more :) xx
    October 22nd, 2010 at 10:32pm
  • xxbrittxxx

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    Wow! that was intense! At least she knows she fucked up by kissing him. Although feeling bad about it afterward doesnt help the fact that she did it. I feel bad for Matt .. thats two gfs that were cheaters. And wtf is up with Syn? I still think he killed the last gf .. there seems to be a pattern here. So glad you brought this story back! Cant wait for next update! :D
    October 22nd, 2010 at 04:50pm
  • therealdeal

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    No friggin lie, I teared up a bit! So much emotions! UPDATE SOON! I cannot wait to see what will happen next! You are an amazing writer <3
    October 22nd, 2010 at 04:04pm
  • itbemet

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    Wow....that's all I can say right now.
    October 22nd, 2010 at 02:19pm
  • regg21

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    Amazingggg!! But wth did he mean Matt had whats coming to him?
    Loved it regardless!
    October 22nd, 2010 at 06:15am
  • kelly yells love.

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    This is just ridiculous, this being the last chapter that I get to read. I could read this story for the rest of my life and never get tired of it.
    I've always been a Syn girl but Matt and Emma need to work out their issues right there. Matt is just...mmm, he needs to stop being like this.
    I swear I've never got this much emotion from a story.
    You really need to write more the moment you finish reading this because I might die without the next chapter.
    October 22nd, 2010 at 06:01am
  • UnbreakMe;UnchainMe

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    >.> <.< Oh My FUCKING God, did that really just end there?! I spent all afternoon reading all of this and I have to say that I really love it xD. It's so intense, and the intensity with that last chapter is soaring through the roof. God, I hope things at least work out a bit cause God, It's nervewrecking! I still have to say though you are an awesome writer xD
    October 22nd, 2010 at 05:01am
  • CharmedLuna

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    I get why Matt is mad, but he did not
    need to treat Emma so horribly. But that scene
    was hot, but I really hope it's not the last time between them.
    Is he going to kick her out? Is she going to leave?
    So many questions and I have to wait another week!
    But it's totally worth it. You have no idea how happy I am
    when I get an e-mail you've updated.
    October 22nd, 2010 at 04:36am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    I feel so bad for Emma! Syn totally screwed her over!
    I really hope Matt believes her and they stay together!
    October 22nd, 2010 at 01:47am
  • darkeyes14226

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    Woah...that was INTENSE!
    October 22nd, 2010 at 01:30am
  • strlitesm

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    Wow! That chapter was amazing!!!! Please post another chapter soon.
    October 22nd, 2010 at 12:33am
  • DiamondInTheRough.xo

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    daaaaamn...that was intense
    i wonder how long Matt is gonna stay
    mad or if he even meant what he said to them...

    awesome update! =)
    October 22nd, 2010 at 12:19am