Haha that was a really cute one-shot! And that song is just so awesome. I can listen to it on repeat for hours! Well, time to raid more of your story comment forums!
I loved this one-shot. I loved the fact that you bolded all the reasons out. Some of them made me laugh though. :tehe:
But wow... Syny was being such an ass in this one-shot. I mean, I almost wanted the girl to take the cigarette and just put it out on his face... but that was a tad evil of me to think.
For some reason, once the mention of her fear of the elevator stopping randomly, I knew it was going to happen. And then it did. It made me feel all smart. :cute:
And wow... Sex in an elevator? Well, if they ever wanna see that tape, they just gotta ask the manager. :tehe:
And I thought it was a legit reason he gave her for blowing her off. Zacky managed to kick his ass. Good enough for me. :tehe:
AMAZING!!!!!!!! you were right sex in an elevator is good!! :P and he said that he loved her!! =] jeepers i would hate to get on Zackys bad side if i was a guy and liked his little sister :P but then again i might like it .... >.> =] <3