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Wow, incredible.
This is an amazing piece, it leaves many questions, which makes the piece better overall because it really grips you as a reader!
It was beautifully written, you set the scene well.

That was incredibly, heart-breakingly, stunningly, blindingly beautiful.
I'm going to review it when it's not pushing two a.m. :3 You're amazing. <3

I loved the one line, where you compared their situation to a soap opera. It is so true that life on those shows seem to be accelerated to a ridiculous pace.

I really liked this oneshot. It had a lot of mystery around it, to me. We don't know the identity of these two, we don't know their situation, we don't know what he was dying of. We don't know anything and, it was still amazing. It gives us the opportunity to imagine it in our mind as whoever we want.

This was really good and I quite enjoyed it, right down to the layout. :cute:

This is incredible, love. It's heart-wrenching and perfect. Your my mentor/tutor/inspiration.

Fuckingincredible one-shot. By far the best I've read. It kind of tugs at your heart. I'm just confused as to how he died. Cancer? Anorexia?

Is this a one shot ?
But wow, this is a good story.
But I don't get why he/she died.