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  • Isadora Pierce

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    Ahaahah. I hate the Jonas brothers so I pictured someone else.xD Really, I just can't get into something with him in it, so...yes. I edited. (;

    I feel horrible for Eve. I mean, she felt so bad and everything, but stupid...Joe...thinks "Oh, no regrets, let's be happy," Blah blah blah. Seriously, is he not thinking straight? She could do the same thing to him over again! Good God!

    You wrote this on my birthday last year, did you know? I saw the date! :D Makes me feel a little peculiar. (; But great job anyways. Changing Joe for myself made a big difference. I loved it.<3
    June 5th, 2010 at 11:55pm
  • paranoid android.

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    Your writing is just so easy to read.
    You don't spend too long in description and you don't move the story too quickly.
    Sweet:
    “Eve, we don't deserve this but we deserve to be happy too."
    June 1st, 2010 at 09:41pm
  • alexander bernadotte

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    Didn't read this one before either D:
    I am going loony. I usually read all of your stuff, lmfao!
    I like how this was really, dunno, simple (:
    Love the plotline too!
    Lovely job, once again <3
    May 31st, 2010 at 06:40pm
  • BeggingForChanges

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    So, to put it simply, I adored this story. I can't pinpoint what made me like it so much, but you did a fantastic job writing this.
    May 30th, 2010 at 11:38pm
  • silk tea.

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    This was good.
    I liked the plot line very well.
    I just pictured someone other than joe jonas. lol.
    xXD
    March 29th, 2010 at 07:26pm
  • colorado dreams.

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    Oh my freaking cows....!
    I loved this. I love your writing.
    Hell, I LOVE YOU!
    Bahh! This was the best one shot EVA!

    OWNAGE BITCHES!
    February 22nd, 2010 at 12:48am
  • getoffmycarousel

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    RACHERYYY! This was an amazing oneshot. I love your writing a bunches. Aww, poor Joe =[.
    October 22nd, 2009 at 02:27pm
  • an 'oriana'?

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    GREAT,
    Rachel, i loved it.

    Really really really. :D x
    August 30th, 2009 at 03:37pm
  • finnick.

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    So...
    OH.MI.GOD.
    THAT WAS FREAKIN AMAZING!
    I loved it, every bit of it!!!
    You're a really talented writer....ah so good!
    August 11th, 2009 at 10:33pm