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  • Maddie Luvz P!atd

    Maddie Luvz P!atd (100)

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    I want more!!!
    August 2nd, 2011 at 10:10am
  • Bottled Hollywood

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    okay well its just the capitalization. i instead of I and starting sentences with capital letters and small stuff like that. if you go and reread it you will see them. its nothing major.
    August 7th, 2009 at 06:14am
  • Bottled Hollywood

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    yay first!

    i totally didnt even know that aiden was a girl until the end of the story when mr. grudge said that he had put them in boy/girl groups. epic fail, right? well anyways it was good. just a few mistakes, but nothing major. more soon??? :cute:
    August 6th, 2009 at 11:51pm
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