Afterlife - Comments

  • frerardlives

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    i like this, it makes you wonder if she'll actually fall for syn or zacky or just use them
    June 5th, 2012 at 11:20pm
  • CourageKeeper

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    This was amazing.
    I've never read a story like this one (:
    March 4th, 2012 at 10:23pm
  • Angel of Vengeance

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    This was very creative. I love If I was Your Vampire by the way. This was awesome!!! Very dark and seductive. I liked it a lot. Keep up the good work!!!! I'm judging for the contest....lol.
    January 18th, 2010 at 07:06am
  • Spunky! at the Disco

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    This is very creative. The lust, the ecstasy, the complete guilt of this story goes along very well with the song itself. This story was a very good interpretation of the song lyrics, and I loved that the story didn’t just focus on the ecstasy, or any other feeling, of just one person. Although, you might want to re-read it, and fix some of your mistakes.
    January 8th, 2010 at 12:46am
  • bona drag.

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    I'm a judge for the Pre-write contest and I really enjoyed this. I liked the forbidden romance and jealous ex lovers aspects. I also love the ending. It fit the story very well. Good work!
    January 7th, 2010 at 05:21am
  • XtremeFairy

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    This was really good. At the end Zacky couldn't really get rid of her completely.
    October 2nd, 2009 at 02:40am