Blind as a Bat - Comments

That was brilliant. :D

I love the story that you pulled from this tattoo. I never would have expected it. I thought that when you titled in Blind As A Bat I was going to get something about how she was blind.

And I was like, "Well that's not very exciting."

But, I loved how you compared her wishing she was blind as a bat because she lost her brother. It was simply brilliant. I really really loved this.

It was as if they flowed from my brain, through the pen, and onto the page, trapped in ink forever, erased from my mind completely.

That line was great. I loved it so much.

Wow.
That was really good.
Really well written and what-not.

Hopefully you'll win the contest.
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