That did NOT suck at all! I agree with Jayde, there was amazing description in there. I also loved the how the beginning was sad and the ending was really happy, cute and as Jayde said, fluffy. I'm not sure if I can do this but, was Alex crying because Teddy was leaving? I love this. Good luck. xxxx
Awweh that was beautiful, you had some really amazing description in there Vicky. No joke that was just lovely ^_^ I really loved it! It was fantastically written! I loved the purposel :) it made for a perfect fluffy ending xD I honestly think its one of your best pieces. I'm sure Grayce will love it also. Heads up for her comment later okay? :) Congradulations on a fantastic one-shot and good luck ^^ Love Pfft X <3
I lovez it xD. I actually quite literally cried at the end. Aww!