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  • Jet Star

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    this is awsome adriana! you should continue this! but then again, I love almost all fantasy.
    February 24th, 2010 at 07:25pm
  • dreamcatcher;

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    Genius!
    I love this, I want to know more, I want to know what happens to her!
    I am really looking forward to this sequel you are planning, I can't wait actually.

    You have a very realistic and flowing way of writing, the transition from story to journal entry was almost seamless and worked perfectly.

    No spelling or grammar errors, so I highly commend you on that xD
    October 11th, 2009 at 08:26am
  • WingsofDust

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    Sounds good so far, out from the prologue it seems you have an original take on shapeshifting. Looking forward to more and good luck!
    September 3rd, 2009 at 08:42am
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