You're The One - Comments

So finally read chapter 5. LOVED IT! Can't wait to read what's going to happen with the doco.

Awesome...guess she is now huh..! LOL

I'm guessing the documentary will crack us up bad, eh? =) And Lance? :P
Can't wait!
Update more frequently, woman!

curious to see what's gonna happen next

More more more! Such an amazing story so far. hahhahahah macho man.

This totally desrvse a comment! Total epicness dude lol

Soooo... not only am I [finally] getting 'round to commenting on Ecstasy... but I am commenting on this too!
But regardless, twas an excellent chapter, despite the pointlessness of it, but it made me happy 'cause I have a bottle of Jack sitting in my room and it's my birthday ^-^
Anyways... 'Macho man'... well, what a nickname haha, it made me laugh when Brian thought it was him... the fail ^-^

Entertaining to the limit :P I liked the triangle to square to pentagon to hexagon thing :P cracked me up.
And Matt is a macho man indeed =D
More soon? :P

This is a great story [:
Please please please continue. i want her to get with matt honestly...or zacky :D

So yeah, when I first read this I totally forgot to comment... then again I had like... 50 emails 'cause I went away...
But anyways! Kick ass chapter man! I liked it, and I found Violet's sudden realization that it was in fact her toaster being blown up hilarious, and of course, Jimmy and Zacky's insistance at being completely and utterly annoying, that was pretty funny too. A good way to cheer me up really ^-^

And I honestly can't believe what happened with Jimmy, has actually happened... it's so sudden...

wow i hate both those first two songs u used in the chapter.

R.I.P Jimmy *tear*

lol loved it

RIP Jimmy

Me likely the story, tis good :D

This was great!!!
:D More soon, please?

Welp... this chapter was... interesting! Haha, no idea why, but it was! ^-^
But wow, have you noticed that everyone calls Zacky either fat or chubby? Haha, anyways, good chapter man ^-^

cant wait for more

Hahahaha. Great chapter!
I loved the bit with Vi and her arguing with the voice in her head.
Hahah. Jimmy stole her pie in 6th grade.
Hellz ya, I Heard Voices is an epic song. Ortan my not be my fave but he has good music taste

great story so far!

It's really good sweetheart!
Does she just bruise easily? Since when Jimbo and Mattie and her were goofing off, she had the bruises forming quickly?
And is she sick or somethin?
She was dizzy and stuffs?
I guess I'll find out later when you update, huh?
Lol. Anyway, great start!
I can't wait for more!!!!

I agree with Betrayed Afterlyfe
:P Ur an amazing writer and this story is really captivating
:D Don't kill us with suspense and update now!!!!!!!