Look Closer - Comments

Ugh I'm a horrible person. It's been way too long since I commented!!!

YAY! Somewhat happy ending. I feel like the last line is open to a sequel...purposeful?

Huh. I thought Alex knew.

Anyway, amazing update. <3

I don't want this story to end...

Anyway, lovely chapter. Her family kinda sucks.

......

So I just read this, and the two other stories that go with it today.

Yeah, I have no life.

But....there's no way there's only what, 21, now 22, comments on this?

You're an amazing writer, and the plotline of your stories leaves me guessing.

=) i love this.

Oh god this is good! Such a chiche plot (drunkenly married in vegas) but you've managed to bring life to the story. Its amazing! Hopw you're able to update it soon:)

YAY! I've missed this one :)

Oh Jack...

Love Chelley's aim ;)

Ooo digging the last line!!

And I'm eager for your new story :)

But I loooove that we got this from Chelley and Jack's point of view (but in the 3rd person). I love that about your writing style.

I love this one. LOVE.

Made my night. I wasn't able to finish my nano (national novel writing month!) and I'm quite upset about it. Half of it disappeared...I cried.

Aw poor Jack.
I hope that they can't get their marriage annulled. :)

Soo excited you updated!

"Does this look like a face that cares?" Angie asked. <---AWESOME!

"Well, we already know you're not right in the head," Angie said. <----I love Angie!

let's blow this popsicle stand.<---one of my favorite phrases. Annnnd I get to go to the casino tomorrow :)

Sorry you life is crazy right now. It's the "holiday" season. Grumble grumble. I hate working retail...

:)
Love it.

Yay I liked the update :D

I like this story so far.
:)

sooo I wasn't subscribed to this. Not. Acceptable.

Anyway, went looking for this today and found it :) yay!

Sooooo I like where this is going. Update-age?

Wtf, Chelley is insane. Not wanting to stay married to Jack.
LOL at Alek and Cassie agreeing with Jack...
and Cassie does make a valid point..but I suppose Chelly REALLY doesn't want too.
Maybe their relationship will improve the next couple of days.
I love this! :D
More pllease.

This makes me happy.
Alex and Cassie still make me happy. :D
this is amazing. <3

HolyFuck!
Like.. FUCK
I did not expect this! LOL
Amazing.
I Love You. :D
Uhm.. fucking Jack and Chelley.. they're so weird.
I agree with Jack though,....maybe they should just got hrough with it.
Im not just saying this because its jack . I think it would be fun . Haha.
:D

more?

HAHAHHA yessss that was so funny.
jack was a total ass for saying that though.
good job :D