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  • Be_Not_Seen

    Be_Not_Seen (100)

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    Everyone won! Go pick a prize. =D
    My Writing Contest
    December 23rd, 2009 at 03:23am
  • stockholm.syndrome

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    Is it strange that I check if you've written any short stories/one-shots/whatever the hell these are when I'm bored? Stranger still that it's 1:30 am and I've accomplished nothing. /digression

    Anywho, very well written. Creativity points for the screenplay-esque opening, closing, and setting transitions.

    And now, back to the paper from which you so successfully distracted me...
    November 5th, 2009 at 10:32am
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    Very well written, I liked it a lot. =D
    Good job!
    You did well for not listening to MCS and still fitting that quote in perfectly. Awesome.
    October 24th, 2009 at 06:27pm
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