Angels - Comments

Wow, that was very awesome. Brendon is an evil manwhore. (Sorry i had to say that XD) Nice story, Rape FTW hehe

that was amazing... really welll written. i read everything i see linked in the sex scenes and how to write them thread... but i dont always comment =[ i had to on this, its so amazing... well done =D

That was well done.
Fresh tears joined the old ones streaming down her eyes
I just loved that one line, poetic I think.

Oh my...
Rape and that...
:|
It was good though. Well written and actually kinda scary, what with the picture and everything..
:tehe:

Yey Firith! :XD

wow
awsome!!

Wow! That was brilliant! I loved the language you used but some of it was hard to understand because it looked like you were about to write one thing and then wrote another. Other than that I loved it

Thankyou. I wanted this because I wanted to try and write a rape scene, and since your good I thought I could ask you. I didnt want to use someone elses name thought, just so noone would be....offended or something. Thankyou. and yes. I do need therapy. but i told my parents if they sat me i would go ito the shower with a toaster,....

Izzy, you need therapy. Just throwing that out there now.

My GOD, Queenie, it was amazing. I can't believe you were actually able to get through it! And I gotta say, you couldn't've picked a better picture for the layout. I STILL say Bren looks like a young Marlon Brando, especially with the fake black eye.

Thanks a lot Queenie.

You're awesome for being able to write this, because I know how hard it was.