Hidden Behind this Camera Lense - Comments

  • Caravaggio

    Caravaggio (100)

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    A few grammar mistakes, and some typos, but the story is very good. Very, very good. It was a very sweet story. And like how you leave it at not quite unrequited love, but also, not possible.

    Really, those typos and sparse grammar mistakes are the only things i can find in it to point out. It's simply brilliant. :D
    December 30th, 2009 at 09:02pm
  • Disaproving_Loyalty

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    this is really really good
    i cnt really use any words i know to describe it
    it's maginficent
    thankyou so much for your entery
    November 2nd, 2009 at 04:52pm