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  • Bellkura

    Bellkura (100)

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    Yeeessss... very pretentious and superfluous before gradually lightening towards the end. Not as much as I expected, but hey, you got the point across.
    Very yummy writing as usual too.
    November 7th, 2007 at 01:22pm
  • x...HelpMe...x

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    interesting
    i loved it
    September 20th, 2007 at 02:50pm
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