Excellant new chapter and in a whole sense im loving this so far...cant wait to read more :D Ophelia is very pretty and youve done well on getting the eye colour right :D
Lovely darling, as always. Though Ophelia is a bit odd looking. Pardon me, but I just can't imagine Megan Fox with a British accent, or with Jasper. Although, I can imagine her as a vampire, or an eccentric teenager. I mean, did you see her in Jennifer's Body?!
What's wrong with Ophelia ?