two: I was wondering why Alice wasn't mentioned in the first chapter; thus my answer. Wondering what's going to happen next? Can't wait to read and find out. Liking this still.
Very interesting. I like the direction that you are taking this. I think - know what's going on with our dear Ophelia. Please, correct me if I am wrong. If I am correct, then this story will just get even more intriguing.
I really like it so far, though its not very far in at all. I was wondering about Alice, nice way of explaining her absence =] It's nice, different from the other fan-fics I've read. Well done, and I can't wait for an update ^.^