I Want Someone to Love Me for Who I Am - Comments

Love it, more soon please!

:( Poor Cam.
I think his parents abuse the poor boy. DX
I'll fix them up nice and good...-Rolls Up Sleeves-
xP
Update soon pleaseeeee?(:
-Checks Profile-

Love your story so far!!!
update soon kay?

-Squeals-
Awhhh. They're okay now(:
Update soon(:

I subscribed, and emailed you back. I like it, but it needs further development.

Good points:
*Amazing diction and characterization, and a great balance of detail and content (and kutos on the lack of converse-- what's up with Mibba and Skinny Jeans/Converse?)
*Great ability to use teenaged concepts to describe a situation, and the ability to leave secondary characters as secondary
*Absolutely fantastic capacity for growth and expansion

Not-So-Great Points:
*Chapters are too short (this coming from the crazy super-typer kid)
*Too vague on things like thoughts, but hyper detailed on movies and single glimpses (which, admittedly, is a great form of characterization)
*Plot line is scaring me, because I've already fallen in love with Cam, and I will NOT deal with an unhappy for this one.

Ironic, right? Hahahahaha.

Pick up a book. I'll email you some, if you want. I could get you anything you want, and you'd have it sitting there on your computer. Don't ask questions.

You know what I just noticed thats creepy,
My name is Cameron, and I have a crush on a boy named Andrew who did nothing but pick on me last year during English class o-o

Ehh Maybe i don't dislike Cam like i did before
but he's still on my list
Making the second part into a sequal is a great idea!!!

I like the new title better for this part. it fits. (:
And I'm glad Cam wasn't avoiding him; it seems like he gets hit by his parents...don't know why...ignore that xD

update soon?
<3

this is wayy too good. :D
i love itttt. :) haha, update soon!

I love it so far; you're an amazing writer!
The character pictures made me laugh for some reason (:
Update soon, kay?

I feel like it's gonna be really predictable but I know you always put in a plot twist so I'm waiting. It's really cute so far a little sad but really cute :D

Awww, poor things.
-Cries-
I don't think I can be mad at Cam. Forizzle. Cause he's so innocent. I think he's just scared and worried. But I do feel really bad for Andrew too though cause he really does like him, but but....):
Poor guys. They're just confused I guess.
-Hugs-
:)
Update soon! :D

Poor Andrew
Damn Cameron, i offically don't like him
mhm, he made Andrew upset :(

aww poor andrew. i feel so bad for him.

This chapter was soo adorable
They kissed =]

aww that was sweet :) andrew is so adorable lol
cant wait for the next update!

Awwwww! ^.^
Tehe, Andrew TOLD him!!!!(:
And they kissed. -Giggles-
Awh. :D Sooooo cute :D
-Sighs- I love this storyyyy. It's adorableeee. :D
Update soonnnnn!(:

Aww im sorry i didn't notice you had a new story up till now
but at least late then never right
Now on to the actual comment for the story

Pretty awesome story you have
Its really interesting
I can't wait for the next update =]

-Smashes Head Against Keyboard-
Oh my gah. I keep forgetting. I knew you were coming out with another story, and I kept putting it off till now....cause I have nothing better to do, and I was examining my profile to iron out any kinks in it, and then I looked at my friends, and I saw your name, and so I was like, "DOH." and I ran over here....well...not literally, and I saw that you only had four chapters posted, and I'm not that late...xP
And now, I'm going to stop talking. My mum says I talk to much....I think I do....O.o
Okay. Now I have to comment on the story. xP So I like the story so far, it's cuteee(:
And the boys are adorable....literally. xP Andrew looks angry though...:O XD
Okay, now I'm really going to stop talking....Oh yeah...Update soon! XP
(PS. Iron Man is amazingggggg. xP)

Awwuh. They're cute. :)
Update soon!