Burn, Hurt, Cry, & Lie - Comments

Interesting.

Joe seems intrigued with August which is really cool I think. I wonder if maybe they'll help each other out and not be depressed anymore.

I mean it'd be awesome if that's how it worked. They'd both be happy again!

Can't wait to read more!

<33 Jean

Hmm this story seems really intriguing. I wonder what happened to August's mother. I know she's passed away otherwise August wouldn't have gone to a funeral, but how did she die?

It's a interesting concept. Is the boy she seeing in the backyard next to her's Joe? Just curious.

I really like this story, and I can't wait to read more of it!

<33 Jean

I like the fact it was inspired by Love The Way You Lie by Eminem, I am a huge fan of that song and I loooooove stories about unhealthy relationships. I'm intrigued to see the relationship progress more. Update soooooon.

OMG!! Yay! You updated!

I have writer's block for this :/

Update pls! It's a good story! Finally a story when not all the characters are as happy as could be.

thx for listening

Don't worry. It's gonna slow down. August & Joe obviously don't know enough about each other yet. & this next chapter is going to clear up when his friend died.

The story is really good, but I think you may be going to fast with Joe and August's relationship. For example, they barely knew each other and he's already trying to kiss her. It's better to go slow. But trust me, it's a wonderful story. Also, Joe seems to be just a tad bit emotional (the crying). But, to me it's very little since someone actually died. When did his friend die? But overall its a good story! Two thumbs up! I'd give it an A- if I were to grade it.