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  • Writing On The Wall

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    For some reason, I loved this one sentence chapter, keep writing!
    June 21st, 2010 at 06:11am
  • Lexington.

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    That one simple chapter said so much. I loved it. I cant really explain it, really. I just.. Loved it.
    June 21st, 2010 at 02:16am
  • Aliyah-loves-A7x

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    That has to be tge shortest chapter ever...
    But it gets the point across
    June 21st, 2010 at 12:45am
  • not worth your time

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    shortest most powerful update i have ever seen! amazing but can we get a bit more soon?
    June 21st, 2010 at 12:39am
  • Liam Cormier

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    If the chapter is meant to be like that
    Impacting, and thoughtful
    I like it, strangely
    One line can be enough of a heart
    Determination, I will help him
    Love it
    xo
    June 21st, 2010 at 12:20am
  • My Venomous Romance

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    Well, at least they are talking again :) I can't wait for the update! Make it soon please!
    June 20th, 2010 at 11:42pm
  • WaayTooObsessed

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    this is too heartbreaking :( i can't believe this. i want them to be together again. why is he so upset?

    more soon!

    <3
    June 18th, 2010 at 03:20am
  • Writing On The Wall

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    Awww this chappy made me tear up a bit. Please write more!!! I absolutely love this story, I've read all of your stories, and if I haven't commented them, I am truly sorry!!! I'm pretty sure I'm rambling now.... awkward. anyway Write more soon please!
    June 17th, 2010 at 03:38pm
  • always infinite

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    So much drama! Frank need to wake the fuck up and realize that he's in deep shit, and he needs to get out of it. And so does Gerard!

    But I love it, your writing. It's amazing, as I'm sure I've said a million times.

    And oh my god, thank you for mentioning me in the A/N! <3 I love you for that!
    June 15th, 2010 at 06:35pm
  • Liam Cormier

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    Oh man, Franks annoying me now
    I just wanna step in there
    Give his face a good hard slap
    And maybe a few punched to the stomach
    Then shout at him
    WAKE THE FUCK UP IERO
    But that won't help an all, will it?
    Cause he's all weak and withering away
    Just a pile of dust on a hospital bed
    Then Gerard thinks it's all his fault
    Part of it is
    But it's Franks fault for making Gerard think it's his fault
    When it's like, harldy anyones fault, right?
    They bought this on themselves
    So fix it
    Or i'll be having words
    anyway
    Loved the update
    xo
    June 15th, 2010 at 01:15pm
  • zeze

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    I loved the prequel a lot more :/ There's not enough frerard anymore so I hope you'd go and fix it.
    June 15th, 2010 at 10:35am
  • michaelryanpritchard

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    i shall cry.

    poor gee.
    i love him. D:
    why's frank such a bitch tonight?
    June 15th, 2010 at 03:47am
  • disturbedlife

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    OMG thats so saddd =( Poor Gee, poor Frankie. They need to get better and love eachother again! Can't they tell that they need eachother!?!?
    June 15th, 2010 at 01:00am
  • Tattoo

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    Poor Gerard :(
    This chapter made me wanna cry.
    Thanks for updating <3
    June 15th, 2010 at 12:51am
  • Rip.Me.Wide.Open

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    The last line in chapter 31 is beautiful.
    June 12th, 2010 at 02:00am
  • always infinite

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    So I finally caught up! This is so good; I love your writing!
    June 10th, 2010 at 11:29pm
  • Liam Cormier

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    So what's brewing now?
    What's Gerard and Frank gunna do?
    Help each other?
    Ignore each other?
    Who's move is it now
    Knight to B4
    Loved the update
    xo
    June 10th, 2010 at 06:05pm
  • zeze

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    FINALLY! I waited so long for this chapter :))
    Anyways, the story is starting to get a little boring, because there isn't as much frerard as in "skin and bones". So I really hope you can make "eat my heart out" a little more similiar to its sequel.
    Upload soon ;)<3
    June 7th, 2010 at 09:16am
  • Tattoo

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    Oh no :(
    I really hope that Frank and Gerard don't end up going their seperate ways.
    They need to fight for each other and help each other!
    Thanks for updating <3
    June 7th, 2010 at 05:54am
  • michaelryanpritchard

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    yaaay! :D
    an update! :D
    i'm happy now. and poor gee. ): he needs a hug.

    and frank and him need to work it out.
    and frank's dad is an ass. (:
    June 7th, 2010 at 02:49am