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  • waves wash

    waves wash (155)

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    I liked this. yes!
    August 2nd, 2011 at 05:14pm
  • sharkbites

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    I liked it. It was different than what I expected, which is always nice. The only thing that I wish had happened was that the story was a little more developed. I feel as if this is a wonderful beginning, but I'm not sure if it can stand as a one-shot. But, it was descriptive and well-written. If you do decide to add any more to it, I'd love to read it.(:
    December 15th, 2009 at 12:50am
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