What I Made for You - Comments

@ Violetta3Tears

@ Hammerwood
thanks guys! it'll be coming soon so look out for it! :D

DOO IT!

DO IT! IM PUMPED!

@ Cat8191
awesome! thanks a lot!

Definitely go for it. I'd love to read this again. I hope you enjoy going over it.
All the best. X

Awww, wow! Talk about a deep story! Had my attention the whole way through. A rollercoaster, definitely!

Jorel being the bad guy?!? Hell no! Just kidding loved the story. But poor Jorel!

I LOVED IT!!
Amazing!!

i'm sad this one is over

Great job!!

effect* o.O affect? I think it would be 'downhill effect'...blonde moment

I'm so sad it's over! It was amazing and amazingly written. Well done.
The poor guy. The down-hill affect is always so tragic when problems just get bigger and worse.
At least it was fiction though. Thank you for writing this. It's inspiring and really gets the imagination going. I loved it.
x

Great job! Wow... this is some intense stuff, but I love it!

OMFG.
BRB SHITTING BRICKS.
OMFG.
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OH MY GOSH, BEFORE I READ.
OMG.
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING.
<33333333333

can't wait for the ending

Wow. This is a really intense story. I could see there kind of being a conclusion here, but are you going to write more? This is really good. :)

Oh my baby Jesus this story is the shit! Crazy Jorel is hot!

This story is A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!!!! I love it!

I absolutely love this. It's so interesting because it is so original and different.
Your imagination is amazing. Really well written. I definitely can't wait for the next chapter.
Well done! This is my new favourite story.

Take care.
x