He Caught My Eye - Comments

WHAT.
That is all I have to say.
Other than my initial assumptions of a tyrannical boy were... slightly correct. And I'm talking about thinking this in the first or second chapter.
But, nonetheless, Team Jace.

I'm still just starting by my oh my you are quite the writer! Way to go for you! I will definitely read more of it. Keep up the great job. I'm really impressed with your writing, and the banners are lovely (I might have skimmed through just to see them xD)!

Janine Mimi

WHATS WRONG WITH JACE?! :O

Thanks guys. :D You all made me so happy.

So I am exhausted today. You know why? Because I stayed up until one this morning reading this entire story. It's sooo good. Except for I kinda like Simon better... I guess I just have a soft-spot for guys like him... anyways, in case you didn't get the point of this comment, it's that I love love love this story. And that I think I'm going to have to take a nap today... update soon! :D

amazingg update! update soon :)

FINALLY. YOU HAVE NO CLUE HOW LONG I WAS WAITING FOR THIS STORY.

“Trust me. We do even crazier stuff in my dreams.” lulz. Seriously. That Jace is pretty suave. But I kinda miss Simon. Just a bit.
The rest of the chapter was very... what's the word? Fulfilling. It'll keep me going until you update again. Like... in the next five seconds.

I LOVE YOU BRO, OKAY?! OK.

Hi. I don't usually comment on stories (because I'm a lazy bum) but I felt the need to tell you how AMAZING this story is. It's seriously one of the cutest stories I have ever read on Mibba (and I've read a lot..) minus the drama with Simon and the others. But ohmygod.

Keep up the great work (great, only because I can't find the right word to fit) and please please please update soon!

Loove it! *she said in a sing-song voice* Lol, update!~!~!~!~!

Jace is such a sexy name, where'd ya get? It reminds me of Jace Wayland.

*waves* I'll get an update on really really really soon. :D Promise.

Not to be pushy or anything, but could you kindly update this? I believe it's been longer than the maximum wait. :) Come ooonn, please? This is one of my favorite stories! *bats eyelashes*

Lool. Ehehehe. things are picking up. ^^

YES I GET THE FEELING
I get this feeling that something bad is slowly creeping in
I don't like the feeling either

Finally! A little more depth to Jace! I've been waiting for it. He seemed so paper thin for a while. I'm glad the plot is really unfolding.

Thank you. :D

OMG! I love this story! I feel sooo bad for Simon! Keep on writing! =) <3

Really loving this story. (:
Can't wait for the next update.

Good luck on your exams!!!

I (hopefully) won't have to take mine in three weeks! The perks of being a senior! :D

Poor Jace. :( He and Naomi really make a pair, don't they? I'm sure he'll help her through everything. :)

Oh no! Ahh i dont like jace,,
nomi needs to get together with simon!!!!
I like simon,, hes sweet,, and hot (:
TEAM SIMON GREY <3

love the storyyyy (: