He Caught My Eye - Comments

Oh gosh! Poor Naomi! God, I teared up for her! I know if my mom were to pull something like that, I'd freak out. I love the house I'm in, and my dad spent so much time on it before he passed, I'd absolutely HATE to leave it.

Cameron sounds like he may cause some trouble, but funnyy trouble. Something tells me if/when Jace and him meet, there's going to be a friendship brewing. And I think there's going to be a friendship (after a long while) between Frostine and Naomi.

Is she going to run over to Jace's though? Because something in me was screaming that she wants to go to Simon's.....

Anywho, great update. Still a huge fan of this story. :) <3

lol yay go asians even though im not asian :( T.T
lol Her life is screwed her mom should've at least considered how Naomi would feel. That is a bit selfish.

looked at characters first and love the story already! gooo asians!! :))))) hahah <3

^^ Thankies for your comments.

I nearly cried...

Gaaaaah. I wanna take Simon aside and give him a talking to. Not a rough one, but, just, kinda... He needs someone talking to him. That isn't Naomi.

And I hope your friend is okay. =[

wow that was intense

god dam it!! i'm crying.. *sighes* update?

Idk if this is an option but Team Simon. Jace just seems like a typical high school boyfriend, nothing really special about him. Bur Simon's genuine and really does love her and it seems like Jace's love for her isn't as strong. I just think that Naomi should be with Simon.

Uh-oh, a talk with her mom, she slapped Laura, and things are screwed up with Simon. Well...at least Jace called her...

I liked the update
She's needs to punch Laura
I also would've brung up the fact that she is bullemic in the lunchroom
I think I know what Jace was doing
And I still like Simon
Happy belated birthday that was also my friend Zoey birthday ^^

Her mom's home. :)
But a 'mysterious' talk. :(
Jace is back, though, so... yeah. :)
Happiness.
~Chelsea~

Ehe, thankies.

seriously. I get sooooo excited when I get the email this updated! I love this story so much, as I say in every comment. It's so good.

I wonder what Jace was doing....hmmm.....

&& I really hope things are at least somewhat amended with Simon.

Xoxo
~Kait~

I really like it so far :)
Awesome job.

I won't be updating this weekenddd. Probably sometime during Tueday to Thursday when I'm free. <3

Thanks. :D

omg!! is that cream for he cheek?
GO her for slapping Laura, i couldent do it
im waiting for an update :)
write more
and by the way, happy birthday for the 10th of march :)

BBvBM: Loool. I still like Simon. xD

Party Queen: LOL. Thanks. ^^

musicgurl35111: Jace has his reasons ~~ :3

The Ants March In: Lol. Ty. :D

allzac: Will do. :D

woooo bitch got owned!!
update soooon