A Little Piece of Heaven - Comments

  • LiacideXIII

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    Hannah,
    I know I haven't commented every chapter like you have on mine, but darling it is honestly worth the wait. I was a little scared to read this at first with her having sex with all the guys in the house (ok, ok most of them haha), but honestly, i love this story so damn much!
    I will start the sequel soon and hun, you are a fantastic writer!
    By the way, I bawled and was half ready to kick some dwarf bassest asss!
    love you hun.
    Liacide XIII
    December 12th, 2010 at 06:40am
  • Aconitum

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    I agree with Johnny.
    I think she's borderline slut.
    But, I really like this story.
    :)
    It's something I've never read before
    It's
    Phresh :D
    February 4th, 2010 at 08:04am
  • justhannah;

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    uh oh whats he gunna say??? Hope you update soon.:)
    January 18th, 2010 at 11:13pm
  • FernFamicide

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    oh my god
    its over :'(
    but sequel! yey!
    January 18th, 2010 at 06:04pm
  • rawryourself

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    Great ending. I love it. Any idea how long you plan on having the sequel?
    January 18th, 2010 at 04:24pm
  • Dame Chance

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    THAT WAS WONDERFUL!! i liked it. sooooooo muchh :D
    January 18th, 2010 at 03:46pm
  • Issues

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    Amazing ending
    January 18th, 2010 at 02:58pm
  • Sydney Scandal

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    Awww... what a sweet ending. =)
    January 18th, 2010 at 05:25am
  • Three Days Grace

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    oh I loved it! :D

    I can't wait for the sequel. I really can't.

    I hope you put it up soon! :)
    January 18th, 2010 at 05:16am
  • SarahAva

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    i liked it. i dont even like avenge sevenfold. muy bien chica.
    January 18th, 2010 at 04:50am
  • Dame Chance

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    DAMN!!! Naomi predicted well :P i hope there is a sequel :]
    January 18th, 2010 at 03:11am
  • rawryourself

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    Awe, that was cute. I don't want this to end! You have to write a sequel!
    January 18th, 2010 at 02:33am
  • Three Days Grace

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    ahh! I'm gone for a weekend and I miss so much!

    Roses On My Grave...I believe I have told you what I think about everytime I hear that song. and I love you for putting it in :D

    the wedding was beautiful, m'dear. thank you :)

    and Lissa's preggers! ahh, the wonders of Johnny's magical sperm. nice, Matt. XD

    and he proposed! that cute little badass! hehe. he'll be a great daddy.

    Jacoby was Naomi's bridesman. I nearly died.
    and yes, he does look good in purple ;)

    the all-knowing Naomi. yes! of course she knew they would meet and marry Avenged Sevenfold ;D

    I must know the ending! update soon, please? and I'm sure the sequel will be amazing :D
    January 18th, 2010 at 02:27am
  • Sydney Scandal

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    YAY!!!!!! XD I'm just sad that it's almost over =( I'll have to read more stories
    January 18th, 2010 at 02:20am
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    yay, he purposed!!!! Please make a sequal, I love your story's.
    January 18th, 2010 at 01:58am
  • IcRaVeVeNgEaNcE

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    Of course! You must keep writing! There HAS to be a sequal! This is such an awesome story!!!
    January 18th, 2010 at 01:47am
  • Skarsgard

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    I think Johnny is going to tell her HE can't have kids, and then they find out it's Brians...somehow.
    Yep, keep writing.
    January 18th, 2010 at 12:21am
  • Sydney Scandal

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    Man, I hope when Johnny left he was going out to get an engagement ring or something 'cause that was pretty douche-worthy
    January 18th, 2010 at 12:18am
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    Have him purpose! that would be an amazing surprise! Please update soon.
    January 18th, 2010 at 12:01am
  • rawryourself

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    I can kinda see where this is going.....maybe. Update soon :)
    January 17th, 2010 at 11:49pm