Monster - Comments

well written.
Kind of sad in a way.

This was very good.
I have a story called Monster, Monster, so I kinda chuckled at this title :D

Really interesting.
I like how you included death throughout the whole thing... without really ever mentioning it.
Brilliant.

Hmm, while it's not as good as your other story (Which was -amazing-, by the way) I could definitely see the awesomeness. I've detected no spelling errors and once again, the way you describe thought processess and feelings makes it seem like I'm actually experiencing the sensations. Even though I don't want to experience them here, I could really empathize with the situation. Awesome, again, your mind is both wonderful and dreadful, a key element to any writer worth their salt. :)

I liked it;
It's very good.
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