Like a Fist to My Gut - Comments

IM IN LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i think they should get together. >.<

update please!!!! I wanna know what happens next... is pickle and prince charming ever going to admitt their feelings?
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just known that you had truly what!? its not finisheddddd.

update soon... lol princess emmy, and prince brendan should live happily ever after. When they destroy the whole shool, especially logan, because he is a butt!lol
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awee!!!!!!

O_O no!!!! keep writing!!!!

im so in love with htis story

jeez, emmy and brendan, belong together... they need to at least be friends again!!!
XD update soon.

awww. great chapter though :D

if brendan doesnt go to the park to tell her that he loves her i'm gonna be really upset lol.
i'm subscribed to alot of stories on here, but i dont get nearly as excited about any of them like i do for this one.
if i get an email from mibba telling me about an update i get excited and hope its for this story. when it is i can't click the link fast enough haha, and when its not i get a little sad, but not too bad because its another good story lol.
this one is, by far, my favorite story that i've ever read from un-published authors. you guys write beautifully together, i think everyone who loves this story would agree with me.

keep the updates coming guys! :]

Awesome update :D

do update please!
it was a pleasant surprise that i got an update so soon since i subscribed this afternoon =)
cool!

update soon!!!
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ps. lalalamelove... that was a super freakin quick update. lol.

haha ur welcome :)
this is an amazing story afterall :P

Well I'm glad that my comment tickled you pink, lol. I seriously am thoroughly engrossed in this story now and can't wait to see how you continue it. It makes me want to write a story from two different perspectives back and forth like that, even if I can't find someone to co-author with me. I don't know how you two do it, but you do it well. Really well.

Anyway, I only just came across this a day or two ago, got completely immersed in it and read everything you had posted so far and cannot wait to see how long it takes for them to realize they're not meant to be apart. Keep it up you two. =]

Haha :P
Great chapter

let them be happy Peach Fuzz and Pickle again, for the wellness of all of us everywhere.
we want PeachPickle!

AWW I want them to date and be together! They are so cute together. And, could her girl bff be anymore jealous? haha great story!!

I really really love this. You two are really good with writing together; I don't think I've ever come across a co-authored story that meshed so well together. Can't wait for more. =]

update really soon... I can't wait to see what happens after the bet is over...
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