Really like this, have you thought about making it into an actual story?
November 5th, 2010 at 06:17am
wow its actually REALLY good. you know what you should do? get off your bum and make a story out of it!!!!!!! really it would be asome. The start is when she meets avenged the end when she gets adopted! then sequel and stuff......
P.S If you REALLY don't want todo it, i'll do it. (i would give you creadit for giving me the idea and stuff)